The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the
village
of Stokeford in
different times, in 1930 and 2010.
the information presented in the images indicates that Stokeford in 1930 was a more natural and a single road serving the local population Change preposition
at
while
in 2010 there were more houses which means more people lived in the village
.
In 1930, there were seven residents in north
and next to the houses two shops were built. Correct article usage
the north
In addition
, farmlands were constructed in northeast
and southwest and gardens were planted in the middle of the Correct article usage
the northeast
village
.
In 2010, the bridge, River stoke
, post office and primary school were Capitalize word
Stoke
similarly
in the same place. In contrast
, Plenty of residential buildings were erected and also
a neighbourhood square was established in the middle. Moreover
, gardens and large houses were converted into retirement home
and three new paths were created to connect between the Fix the agreement mistake
homes
village
of Stokeford.Submitted by Endo on
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