The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. -> The line graph compares the urban populations of four countries between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2024.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

-> The line graph compares the urban populations of four countries between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2024.
The line graph compares the urban populations of four
countries
between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2024.
Overall
, projections show that all
countries
will witness a dramatic increase in the proportion of city residents, with
Malaysia
being expected to see the greatest growth. In 1970, the percentages of urban inhabitants of the Philippines and
Malaysia
were roughly the same, at around 30%, compared to 20% for Thailand and 15% for Indonesia.
Malaysia
witnessed the most dramatic increase, with figures rising to nearly 75% by 2020. Indonesia overtook the other two to become the country with the
second largest
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urban population, with nearly half of the total population living in cities in 2020.
While
the Philippines saw a drop in the proportion of urban residents between 1990 and 2010, Thailand’s figure rose steadily to nearly 30% by 2020. By 2040, it is predicted that the urban populations of all these
countries
will grow, with
Malaysia
still top of the list, at nearly 85%, followed by Indonesia, at more than 60%. The figures for the other two
countries
are
also
expected to increase, but at a slower rate, with more than 55% of Filipinos and around 45% of
Thai
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being projected to live in cities by 2040.
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