The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1959 and 2008. Summarize the information and by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1959 and 2008. Summarize the information and by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of time working
activities
(which is divided into six parts) by adults in a specific country in the period of time between 1959 to 2008.
Overall
, in both years, the percentage of working was higher than other
activities
, and they
secondly
preferred sleeping . In 1958, Interestingly, sleeping
activities
among adults were close to working with 32 per
cent
. 50 years later,
this
dropped to 25 per
cent
and working had increased to 42.
Similarly
, relaxing at home rose relatively from 8 to 13 . In 2008, Going out (with friends / family) witnessed a significant fall with only 6 per
cent
compared with 19 in 1958 .
Additionally
, other
activities
such
as hobbies and playing sports remained the same at 6 per
cent
in both years which is
also
the same as going out.
Lastly
, travel at work rose sharply from 2 to 8 per
cent
.
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