Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase - Red dotted dress ,medium size , maxi dress -> describe the problem - got small size , which is tight to my waist and short to length -> explain why you need a replacement urgently - I need dress as a gift ,birthday coming soon Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I am not satisfied with the
dress
I purchased
last
Thursday on your website online . It never
happend
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happened
in
last
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few years. I purchased a
red dotted
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dress
for my best friend . I ordered
according to
your size measurement chart and
select
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option medium size, and
also
choose
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maxi
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the maxi
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dress
option because my friend
like
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maxi
instead
of mini
dress
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.
Beside
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this
, only 5 items left when
i
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I
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was about to check out, and fortunately my payment successfully
go
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went
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through and got the confirmation message immediately.
However
, I
suppose
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to receive
this
dress
within 5 days but I received
this
dress
after 10 days ,which was super
delay
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for me .
Beside
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this
, I got
this
dress
in black
color
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instead
of red one and smaller in size . After a long period of wait , I am really dissatisfied with the service I received from your store. I would request you to ship me another
dress
which I ordered
orignally
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originally
from your website
with in
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within
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a few days because my best
friend
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friend's
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birthday coming soon and she really
like
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the quality of your clothing brand . I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur.
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Grammar
Try to avoid minor grammatical errors for a smoother read, such as 'I suppose to' should be 'I was supposed to.'
Logical Structure
Ensure your letter is logically structured with smooth transitions between ideas. Your points are clear, but some sentences could connect more fluidly.
Specific Details
The letter provides specific details of the purchase and explains the problem clearly.
Suitable Tone
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal complaint to a company.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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