Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase - Red dotted dress ,medium size , maxi dress -> describe the problem - got small size , which is tight to my waist and short to length -> explain why you need a replacement urgently - I need dress as a gift ,birthday coming soon Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I am not satisfied with the

dress

I purchased

last

Thursday on your website online . It never

happend

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happened

last

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the last

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few years. I purchased a

red dotted

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red-dotted

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dress

for my best friend . I ordered

according to

your size measurement chart and

select

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selected

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option medium size, and

also

choose

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chose

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maxi

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the maxi

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dress

option because my friend

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likes

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maxi

instead

of mini

dress

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dresses

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Beside

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Besides

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this

, only 5 items left when

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was about to check out, and fortunately my payment successfully

Wrong verb form

went

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through and got the confirmation message immediately.

However

, I

suppose

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was supposed

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to receive

this

dress

within 5 days but I received

this

dress

after 10 days ,which was super

delay

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delayed

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for me .

Beside

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Besides

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this

, I got

this

dress

in black

color

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colour

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instead

of red one and smaller in size . After a long period of wait , I am really dissatisfied with the service I received from your store. I would request you to ship me another

dress

which I ordered

orignally

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originally

from your website

with in

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within

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a few days because my best

friend

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friend's

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birthday coming soon and she really

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likes

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the quality of your clothing brand . I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur.

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Grammar

Try to avoid minor grammatical errors for a smoother read, such as 'I suppose to' should be 'I was supposed to.'

Logical Structure

Ensure your letter is logically structured with smooth transitions between ideas. Your points are clear, but some sentences could connect more fluidly.

Specific Details

The letter provides specific details of the purchase and explains the problem clearly.

Suitable Tone

The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal complaint to a company.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

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