You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card
Dear Mr. Lee,
I hope you are well when you are receiving
this
letter.
My name is Ali. I am a student at the university.
I have faced some issues with the identification card
. In the beginning, we are in the exam season. I studied hard all weekend. When I came today to the university, I had no idea that my card
was missing.
Unfortunately, the security man not
allow me to enter the building. Change the verb form
does not
did not
As a result
, I couldn't take the test.
Now, I must return the whole year because of this
situation. I am thinking of explaining this
to my teacher. I hope he will understand and give me a chance to do my test.
However
, I will be so grateful if you print another card
for me. Also
, if you can write a letter to my teacher that I really lost my card
and I couldn't enter the university.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Ali ShaneSubmitted by ahadaloufi3a on
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and logical structure, try organizing your paragraphs more clearly. For example, start one paragraph with your issue and have another paragraph for how it affects you. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and follow a logical progression.
task achievement
Consider using more varied vocabulary and grammatical structures to enhance the text. Also, avoid repetition and ensure that all sentences serve to advance the main points of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-formulated, creating a polite and respectful tone.
task achievement
The letter provides a suitable and polite tone, which is appropriate for a formal letter to the director of student services.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.