The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the young population of children divided by
age
groups in the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2001.
In general, the Use synonyms
age
from 0 to 4 significantly decreased Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
rate
of children aged from 10 to 14 Use synonyms
years
increased over time.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990, the figure for the group from 0 to 4 was 26% which is more than the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
rate
over 4 and under 10 by 1.5%. After 2 Use synonyms
years
, both the percentages of the two groups witnessed a slight increase. Use synonyms
However
, in 1993, the gathering figure under 5 dropped rapidly and reached the lowest proportion at nearly 23.5% in 2001. Meanwhile, the proportion of Linking Words
age
from 5 to 9 went up to its highest Use synonyms
rate
at 26% in 1997 before falling by 1% in 2001.
Related to two gatherings of ages over 10 Use synonyms
years
old, with the percentage of children from 15 to 19, it grew over time and raised to the highest figure at under 26% after a decade. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the remaining group Linking Words
rate
from 10 to 14 heavily dropped by 3% in 2003 and remained steady after 3 Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
However
, in 1996, it had a slight growth and reached a quarter in 2001.Linking Words
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