The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the hiring
rate
in percentage among four various jobs in Australia
.during
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during
the
period
from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
, there seems to be an
increase
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trend in
employment
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the employment
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rate
in technology, healthcare, and construction over the
period
.
On the other hand
,
retail
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the retail
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industry had a gradual decline
in
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the same time. Regarding construction and health
care
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care,
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they both started the
period
with
rate
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a rate
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of roughly 10% in 1985.
While
construction
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the construction
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enrollment
rate
had a gradual increase till it ended at just above 50% in 2015,
healthcare
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the healthcare
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employment
rate
had a drastic jump to roughly 25% in 1990 and remained the same for the next five years
then
graudally
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gradually
rose till it hit 60% in 2015 being the highest hiring
rate
among the four jobs, Turning to
technology
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the technology
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recruitment
rate
it began the
period
just the same as the previous two jobs, with just above 10% in 1985.
Then
had a steady gradual
grow
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till it arrived at roughly 55% in 2015, being the second highest recruiting job after healthcare.
In contrast
,
retail
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the retail
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employment
rate
began at roughly 15% in 1985,
then
rose to a peak of about 23% in 1995 and gradually declined after till it dipped in 2015 with a hiring
rate
of about 5%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 4 times.

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