The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the hiring
rate
in percentage among four various jobs in Australia .during
the Correct your spelling
during
period
from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
, there seems to be an increase
trend in Change the verb form
increasing
employment
Correct article usage
the employment
rate
in technology, healthcare, and construction over the period
. On the other hand
, retail
industry had a gradual decline Add an article
the retail
in
the same time.
Regarding construction and health Change preposition
at
care
they both started the Add a comma
care,
period
with rate
of roughly 10% in 1985. Add an article
a rate
While
construction
enrollment Correct article usage
the construction
rate
had a gradual increase till it ended at just above 50% in 2015, healthcare
employment Correct article usage
the healthcare
rate
had a drastic jump to roughly 25% in 1990 and remained the same for the next five years then
graudally
rose till it hit 60% in 2015 being the highest hiring Correct your spelling
gradually
rate
among the four jobs,
Turning to technology
recruitment Correct article usage
the technology
rate
it began the period
just the same as the previous two jobs, with just above 10% in 1985. Then
had a steady gradual grow
till it arrived at roughly 55% in 2015, being the second highest recruiting job after healthcare. Replace the word
growth
In contrast
, retail
employment Correct article usage
the retail
rate
began at roughly 15% in 1985, then
rose to a peak of about 23% in 1995 and gradually declined after till it dipped in 2015 with a hiring rate
of about 5%Submitted by remasalotaibi678 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 4 times.
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