The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians who gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The bar chart above shows information about the percentage of Canada's
citizen
who donate their money to charitable organisations from various ages between Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
years
2000 and 2015. Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, the category of Linking Words
age
range from 18 to 49, the charity was high in 2000. But, from Use synonyms
age
50 until 65 and over, the charity was high in 2015.
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Firstly
, in 2000, people from Linking Words
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age
group 18 to 24 donated their money up to 20 per Correct article usage
the age
cent
. Use synonyms
However
, the number decreased to 11 per Linking Words
cent
in 2015. Use synonyms
Then
, in 2000, Linking Words
people
who Correct article usage
the people
give
their money Wrong verb form
gave
for
charity Change preposition
to
was
around 29 per Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cent
. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, the Linking Words
per
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percentage
cent
was Use synonyms
become
lower to 25 per Verb problem
apply
cent
in 2015. After that, from Use synonyms
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age
category 35 to 49, in 2000, the Correct article usage
the age
per
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percentage
cent
was really high among other categories, which was 39 per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the per Linking Words
cent
steadily down to 34 per Use synonyms
cent
.
Even so, there are two types of Use synonyms
age
range that the trend was Use synonyms
increase
. The first one is ages from 50 to 64, in 2000, the Wrong verb form
increased
per centage
was only 34 per Correct your spelling
percentage
cent
. Use synonyms
Then
, constantly up to 38 per Linking Words
cent
. Use synonyms
Last
category, Linking Words
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age
group from 65 and beyond, in 2000, the Correct article usage
the age
per centage
was 31 per Correct your spelling
percentage
cent
. Afterwards, slightly upwards to 34 per Use synonyms
cent
.Use synonyms
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