The bar chart show the number of male and female students doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph demonstrates the
quantity
of pupils based on gender who are doing scientific research on different subjects at a UK university in the year 2009.
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Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of male students outweighed the female
in all the fields except Fix the agreement mistake
females
the
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medicine
. Both of them were highly interested in Biology making it the subject with highest
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the highest
whereas
women
in physics were very few and so were men
in veterinary medicine
.
Biology had the highest number
of male researchers of
about 230 with 200 other Change preposition
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women
participants . Beside
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Besides
Medicine
and Physics were another
popular fields involving almost 200 and 220 Correct quantifier usage
other
men
respectively. However
, it was veterinary medicine
along with
the medicine
for women
with nearly 170 and 70 lesser to that respectively.
Astronomy, Geology and veterinary medicine
attracted very less
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of the
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number
of boy
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boys
of
approximately 150 and only about 70 were enrolled in the latter. In comparison , Change preposition
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women
did not want to research physics as much as men
and apparently 40 of them only showed their interest. Furthermore
, a little higher by about 10 and 20 were in Astronomy and Geology respectively and they outnumbered men
in veterinary medicine
by roughly 30.Submitted by raialon4047 on
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