The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the percentages of the three categories that citizens in the UK spent money by each age
group
in 2004. Overall
, the percentage of Food and Drink increased in accordance with age, in contrast
, the amount of the Restaurant
and Hotel marked the highest figure in the youngest Fix the agreement mistake
Restaurants
group
.
It is clear that
Food and Drink’s figures were increasingly enlarged from around 5% in the group
under 30 years
old to over 20% in the oldest group
. Similarly
, Entertainment’s percentages were developed by over 20% in the group
61-75 years
, before experiencing a significant decreasing figure in the over 76 years
group
.
On the other hand
, the highest expense for the category of Restaurant and Hotel is observed in the youngest group
, nearly 15%. The subsequent two groups maintained their percentages of this
category around 12 to 13%, despite diminished figures from the under 30 years
group
. However
, in the 61-75 years
group
, this
category dropped dramatically, while
it showed a growth of over 5% in the oldest group
.Submitted by am on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words group, years with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!