You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of global Sales
in
four types of digital Change preposition
of
game
from 2000 to 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
games
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that global sales in handheld games
showed the highest proportion in all period
; Fix the agreement mistake
periods
whereas
, online games
were seen the lowest over the seven years.
Observing the chart in more detail, handheld games
had the largest amount with about 17 billions
. Console Change to singular
billion
games
was
the second in 2005 accounting for around 6 Change the verb form
were
billions
. Followed by Change to singular
billion
conside
Correct word choice
apply
games
and online games
accounting for almost 5 billions
and 3 Change to singular
billion
billions
respectively.
Change to singular
billion
In contrast
, the lowest figure was in 2001 approximately 1 billions
. One striking piece of Change to a singular noun
billion
Correct your spelling
information
informatia
to be noticed is that both online Correct your spelling
information
games
and Console games
have roughly 4 billions
. an equal amount ofChange to singular
billion
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words games, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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