Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?
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vocabulary
Try to use more varied and precise vocabulary to express your ideas clearly and accurately. Avoid repetition and ensure word choices fit the context.
grammar
Work on sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and fragments. Short and clear sentences often make your arguments more persuasive.
structure
Make sure each paragraph serves a clear purpose and ties back to the thesis statement. Avoid tangents and stay focused on supporting your main argument.
example
You included relevant examples to support your main points, which helps clarify and strengthen your argument.
balanced view
The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of credit cards, showing a balanced view before stating your own opinion.
task response
You have managed to cover the main points of the task, such as how credit cards can help with expenses and their associated risks.