The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The given tables show the information about the
production
and consumption of coffee and
banana
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bananas
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in 1999 and 2004 in five countries. The productions are measured in millions of euros.
Overall
, it is evident that
UK
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the UK
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had
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apply
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became the the largest both
production
and consumption in banana 2004 which nearly
reach
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reached
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50
million
euro
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euros
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, followed by coffee which
also
became the leader in 2004 by collecting 20
million
euro
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euros
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. In terms of coffee, Switzerland
lead
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the position
initially
in 1999, by
gathered
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gathering
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3
million
euro
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euros
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.
While
in 2004 it had a significant growth at precisely 6
million
euro
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euros
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, it still could not
chasing
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be chasing
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the UK
production
.
Additionally
, Denmark, Belgium and
Sweden
have a quite similar track record,
while
both Denmark and
Sweden
had
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apply
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slightly increased from 1999 to 2004 by 0.2
million
at 2 and 1, respectively. Meanwhile, Belgium,
as
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apply
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at
start
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the start
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it collected 1
million
in 1999, it rose moderately
at
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to
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1.7
million
in
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at
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the end of the year. Regarding bananas,
UK
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the UK
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remained
as
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apply
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the biggest in both
production
and consumption in 1999 at
exatly
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exactly
15
million
euro
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euros
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,
while
another countries
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another country
other countries
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only had small proportions,
which
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apply
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only
Sweden
whose
production
reached 2
million
. In 2004, Switzerland and Denmark
succeed
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succeeded
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to raise
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in raising
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their
production
into
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to
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5.5 and 4
million
, respectively, which made them placed in
second-third
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the second-third
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position.
In contrast
,
Sweden
whose
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which
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initially
had a good start in 1999,
it
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apply
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saw a significant decline by 1.1
million
at
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to
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0.9
million
in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, euro, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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