The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given tables show the information about the
production
and consumption of coffee and banana
in 1999 and 2004 in five countries. The productions are measured in millions of euros.
Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
Overall
, it is evident that UK
Correct article usage
the UK
had
became the the largest both Unnecessary verb
apply
production
and consumption in banana 2004 which nearly reach
50 Wrong verb form
reached
million
euro
, followed by coffee which Fix the agreement mistake
euros
also
became the leader in 2004 by collecting 20 million
euro
.
In terms of coffee, Switzerland Fix the agreement mistake
euros
lead
the position Wrong verb form
led
initially
in 1999, by gathered
3 Wrong verb form
gathering
million
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
While
in 2004 it had a significant growth at precisely 6 million
euro
, it still could not Fix the agreement mistake
euros
chasing
the UK Change the verb form
chase
be chasing
production
. Additionally
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
have a quite similar track record, while
both Denmark and Sweden
had
slightly increased from 1999 to 2004 by 0.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
at 2 and 1, respectively. Meanwhile, Belgium, as
at Change preposition
apply
start
it collected 1 Correct article usage
the start
million
in 1999, it rose moderately at
1.7 Change preposition
to
million
in
the end of the year.
Regarding bananas, Change the preposition
at
UK
remained Correct article usage
the UK
as
the biggest in both Change preposition
apply
production
and consumption in 1999 at exatly
15 Correct your spelling
exactly
million
euro
, Fix the agreement mistake
euros
while
another countries
only had small proportions, Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
which
only Correct pronoun usage
apply
Sweden
whose production
reached 2 million
. In 2004, Switzerland and Denmark succeed
Wrong verb form
succeeded
to raise
their Change preposition
in raising
production
into
5.5 and 4 Change preposition
to
million
, respectively, which made them placed in second-third
position. Correct article usage
the second-third
In contrast
, Sweden
whose
Correct pronoun usage
which
initially
had a good start in 1999, it
saw a significant decline by 1.1 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
at
0.9 Change preposition
to
million
in 2004.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, euro, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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