The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given tables show the information about the
production
and consumption of coffee and Use synonyms
banana
in 1999 and 2004 in five countries. The productions are measured in millions of euros.
Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
had
became the the largest both Unnecessary verb
apply
production
and consumption in banana 2004 which nearly Use synonyms
reach
50 Wrong verb form
reached
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
, followed by coffee which Fix the agreement mistake
euros
also
became the leader in 2004 by collecting 20 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
.
In terms of coffee, Switzerland Fix the agreement mistake
euros
lead
the position Wrong verb form
led
initially
in 1999, by Linking Words
gathered
3 Wrong verb form
gathering
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
While
in 2004 it had a significant growth at precisely 6 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
, it still could not Fix the agreement mistake
euros
chasing
the UK Change the verb form
chase
be chasing
production
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Denmark, Belgium and Linking Words
Sweden
have a quite similar track record, Use synonyms
while
both Denmark and Linking Words
Sweden
Use synonyms
had
slightly increased from 1999 to 2004 by 0.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
at 2 and 1, respectively. Meanwhile, Belgium, Use synonyms
as
at Change preposition
apply
start
it collected 1 Correct article usage
the start
million
in 1999, it rose moderately Use synonyms
at
1.7 Change preposition
to
million
Use synonyms
in
the end of the year.
Regarding bananas, Change the preposition
at
UK
remained Correct article usage
the UK
as
the biggest in both Change preposition
apply
production
and consumption in 1999 at Use synonyms
exatly
15 Correct your spelling
exactly
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
, Fix the agreement mistake
euros
while
Linking Words
another countries
only had small proportions, Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
which
only Correct pronoun usage
apply
Sweden
whose Use synonyms
production
reached 2 Use synonyms
million
. In 2004, Switzerland and Denmark Use synonyms
succeed
Wrong verb form
succeeded
to raise
their Change preposition
in raising
production
Use synonyms
into
5.5 and 4 Change preposition
to
million
, respectively, which made them placed in Use synonyms
second-third
position. Correct article usage
the second-third
In contrast
, Linking Words
Sweden
Use synonyms
whose
Correct pronoun usage
which
initially
had a good start in 1999, Linking Words
it
saw a significant decline by 1.1 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
Use synonyms
at
0.9 Change preposition
to
million
in 2004.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, euro, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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