The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The given tables show the information about the
production
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and consumption of coffee and
banana
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bananas
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in 1999 and 2004 in five countries. The productions are measured in millions of euros.
Overall
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, it is evident that
UK
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the UK
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had
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became the the largest both
production
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and consumption in banana 2004 which nearly
reach
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reached
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50
million
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euro
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, followed by coffee which
also
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became the leader in 2004 by collecting 20
million
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euro
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. In terms of coffee, Switzerland
lead
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the position
initially
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in 1999, by
gathered
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3
million
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euro
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.
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in 2004 it had a significant growth at precisely 6
million
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euro
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, it still could not
chasing
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be chasing
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the UK
production
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.
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, Denmark, Belgium and
Sweden
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have a quite similar track record,
while
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both Denmark and
Sweden
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had
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slightly increased from 1999 to 2004 by 0.2
million
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at 2 and 1, respectively. Meanwhile, Belgium,
as
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at
start
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the start
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it collected 1
million
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in 1999, it rose moderately
at
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to
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1.7
million
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in
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at
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the end of the year. Regarding bananas,
UK
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the UK
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remained
as
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apply
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the biggest in both
production
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and consumption in 1999 at
exatly
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exactly
15
million
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euro
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,
while
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another countries
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only had small proportions,
which
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apply
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only
Sweden
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whose
production
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reached 2
million
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. In 2004, Switzerland and Denmark
succeed
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succeeded
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to raise
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in raising
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their
production
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into
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to
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5.5 and 4
million
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, respectively, which made them placed in
second-third
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the second-third
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position.
In contrast
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,
Sweden
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whose
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which
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initially
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had a good start in 1999,
it
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saw a significant decline by 1.1
million
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at
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to
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0.9
million
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in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, euro, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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