The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts illustrate the proportion of the highest industrial
water
used for different purposes
Namely industrial, agricultural and domestic use
in six areas
of the world.
Overall
, it is evident from the charts that North America
and EuropeAdd a missing verb
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use
of water
while
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areas
the
most significant Add a missing verb
have the
use
in Agriculture of water
.By contrast
, domestic use
is least from
other Change preposition
in
areas
.
It is clear that
the agricultural use
is most massively in this
charts. In Central Asia
it stands in the first position with 88% Add a comma
Asia,
use
of water
in agriculture- which stands in the first range. However
, Africa, South East Asia
and South America
range relatively close with 84%,81% and 71% respectively.
On the one hand, industrial use
in North America
and Europe is the highest with 48% and 53% use
of water
. In other
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the other
areas
, industrial use
of water
is less than others.
On the other hand
, in South America
19% of the Add a comma
America,
water
is used which is the highest range in this
area. In addition
, Europe and North America
are relatively close with 15% and 13%. Moreover
, in Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
are almost similar ranges the percentages of 9, 7 and 7.Submitted by mdtipusultanakhand on
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