The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts provide data about the proportion of
water
used for three different purposes in different locations.
Overall
it can be seen that the percentages of water
which is used much more in four areas for agriculture without North America
and Europe. While
it is much use in NA and EU for industries. Almost all countries less
use Correct quantifier usage
apply
water
for domestic purposes.
Looking at the data sets, to begin
with, farming, central
Capitalize word
Central
Asia
is the lead with 88%- first higher than others, 84% with Africa,81% with Southeast Asia
,and 71% with South America
respectively.
As to industry, 53% of the water
is used Europe
, the first higher user for production and 48 % by North Change preposition
in Europe
America
. While
other four counties less used water
form those.
we show every much less use water
for household work,south America
is the much higher users than others. While
Central Asia
and East asia
were the lowest Change the capitalization
Asia
user
with 7% respectively.Change the noun form
users
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