Question -Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available
Dear Sam:
I am writing to you
for giving
Change preposition
to give
an
update about Fredy's leaving party. Considering that Correct pronoun usage
you an
the
Change the word
my
last
day of work of Fredy is on friday
12 August, we can make the venue on Change the capitalization
Friday
saturday
13 August at four Change the capitalization
Saturday
o'colck
in Correct your spelling
o'clock
afternoon
.
I was thinking Add an article
the afternoon
to reserve
a bowling table Change preposition
of reserving
were
we can have drinks, eat something and play bowling Correct your spelling
where
matchs
. I believe it is a funny game. Correct your spelling
matches
match
This
bowling is very popular for their giants
Fix the agreement mistake
giant
hamburguers
and good reputation in cocktails. The menu Correct your spelling
hamburgers
include
vegetarian and vegan options too. The bowling Change the verb form
includes
name's
is Concord and is located Change the noun form
names
name
in
Hall Change preposition
on
st
130 in Northbridge, which means that we have plenty of options Capitalize word
St
of
Change preposition
for
entretainment
around.
After that, there is a bar Correct your spelling
entertainment
call
Firegum Change the form of the verb
called
that is
very popular for their live band
music. That night it will be play
a rock Change the verb form
be playing
band
tribute at 9 O'clock and Fredy loves this
band
. The band
's name is Roses and Guns. Probably, we could get a place in this
gig.
I looking forward to hearing from you.
Let me know what you think.
MarcoSubmitted by marcodimonaco89 on
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. For example, the paragraph discussing the venue could be separated from the paragraph about entertainment options.
task achievement
Double-check the letter for minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, such as 'wich' instead of 'which' and 'O'clock' instead of 'o'clock'.
task achievement
You could provide more details about why the suggested date and time are suitable for everyone.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are very polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
complete response
The letter covers all the task requirements effectively, suggesting a suitable date, venue, and entertainment options.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable and friendly, yet professional, which is fitting for the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,