The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the labour force distribution in agriculture, industry and services sectors in Germany, USA, Japan and
China
in 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it is apparent that
China
had a unique distribution of workforce in the
three
sectors, with agricultural workers standing at the higher percentage,
while
the other
three
developed countries shared a similarity, having the least of its
population
contributed to the
sector
, and most to the industrial
sector
in both years. In 1980,
Chinese
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dedicated to the farming
sector
, with almost 70% of its
population
working in agricultural-related occupations.
In contrast
, only less than 10% of the
population
in Germany, the USA and Japan were working in the
sector
. The industry was major in the
three
developed nations, consisting of 60% , 50% and 49% of their working
population
, respectively. In 2010, the trend did not change significantly, as
China
remained an agriculture-reliant country, with half of its
population
working in the
sector
, and the other
three
nations still had their industrial
sector
as the primary
sector
.
However
, the share of the labour force in the services
sector
dropped dramatically in all four countries, with
China
experiencing an almost 30 per cent drop point, 10 for Germany, 11 for the US, and 9 for Japan.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, three, population, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • sector
  • distribution
  • dominance
  • decline
  • significant changes
  • employment
  • patterns
  • trends
  • global
  • compare
  • highlight
  • examine
  • identify
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