The charts below show the proportion of British students at one University in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The charts provide the percentages of British
students
who were able to speak other languages besides
English at one University of England between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the majority of students
could speak Spanish, another language
, or two other languages those are
increased Verb problem
which
at the end
. While
as to no other language
, France were
decreased, respectively. There are no changes in German.
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was
To begin
with, Spanish stood at 30% to 35%, which is higher than other of the charts. Another language
and two other languages also
increased with
15% and 10% to 20% and 15% in 2000 and 2010, respectively. Change preposition
by
Furthermore
, there are no changes in the number of German-speaking students
with 10% for each.
On the other hand
, 20% of students
could not speak no
other Rewrite the sentence
could not speak any
could speak no
language
, whereas
this
decreased to 15% at end
of the year. Correct article usage
the end
Students
of the British University who able
to speak Add a missing verb
were able
Frence
started with 15%, but it Correct your spelling
French
France
also
lost 10% in 2010.Submitted by mdtipusultanakhand on
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