The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
The figure illustrates the
number
of borrowed
books
from four
libraries
in four consecutive months in the year 2914, and the chart gives information about the type of
books
borrowed by percentages during the same time.
Overall
, it is apparent that almost half of
borrowed
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books
were fictional,
whereas
the least were self-help
books
.
Moreover
,
according to
the line graph, all
libraries
experienced a growth in the
number
of borrowed
books
over the given time, with Sutton Wood library having the highest numbers, except for Ryeslip which faced a fall. Regarding the
libraries
, both West Eaton and Church mount
libraries
showed the same trend,
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with 50
books
in June which rose to around 100 in July and ended the period with 150
books
in September.
Moreover
, Sutton Wood library had the highest
number
of
books
borrowed,
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with 250 in June and
increased
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increasing
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in July to drop dramatically in August to just 100
books
;
nonetheless
, the
number
skyrocketed to 300 in September. Turning to Ryeslip, it started in July with
the
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more borrowed
books
than the three
libraries
, with 300
books
.
However
, the amount gradually decreased till the end of the period, ending with roughly 170
books
in September. The type of
the
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borrowed
books
was largely fiction,
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for 43%, biography in second place with 19%, history and science made an equal fraction with 14%, and self-help
books
were the least borrowed with only 10%.
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