A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

Dear Salem, I hope

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letter finds you well, I'm writing to give you some

advices

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that help you become a social person. I

konw

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know

it's quite difficult to make

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new friends, but when you understand the tricks people use you will have lots of relationships. The most attractive trick is sharing something with the person next to your seat.

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, a book you recommend

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for him or even a piece of candy.

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, you must assist your classmate if they have any

question

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try

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and try

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to help them that makes them come to you

everytime

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. Do you remember how we

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to know each other? it's by engaging at a Sama Club, and we become

a close friends

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close friends

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! So you have to enter the school club and be a powerful member who

provide

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information and

engage

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engages

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in

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discussions with other

memebers

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members

. I suggest that you ask the teacher to the

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class leader so that will

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you

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confidence.

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, open a group with your

classmate

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classmates

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so you

could

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text

with

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them during summer vacation. Best Regards. Hamad