The figures provide info about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the economic graph of expenditure and a four pie chart illustrating categories of
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a 15-years
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period from 1995 to 2010. Correct your spelling
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Overall
,housing and food were the most significant spending than others . Linking Words
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economic development declined sharply around 2010 with the lowest level.
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, there are 6 categories,the biggest major investments for housing, meals , and others. Meanwhile, Linking Words
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enhanced clothing, travel ,and others ,the housing and meals go down over 10 years. Linking Words
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,the number of entertainment, travel and clothing complied a small value. The outlay remained how it was before .Linking Words
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