The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams
shows
recycling statistics for four materials between 1982 and 2010, namely, Change the verb form
show
paper
and cardboard, glass
containers
, aluminium
cans and plastics. Overall
, the volumes of paper
and cardboard and glass
containers
were volatile over the period while
aluminium
maintained an up trend and plastics were nearly stagnent
with only an increase of less than 5%. It is important to note that in 1982 there were only two materials being recycled, Correct your spelling
stagnant
aluminium
and plastic joined later in 1986 and 1990 respectively.
In 1986 paper
was the most recycled at around 65%, while
only one in every 2 glass
containers
were recycled. From that year paper
cardboard gradualy
increased Correct your spelling
gradually
their
volume to 70% by 1986, it recorded its highest volume in 1994 at 80%, meanwhile, Correct pronoun usage
its
glass
containers
was
declining in the same period. Change the verb form
were
It is clear that
when aluminium
started recycling it became so popular that it rapidly increased by more than 40% over the
time.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, containers, aluminium with synonyms.
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