The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of four age groups of cinema visitors in a
specefic
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specific
country from 1978 to 2008.
Overall
, all of
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the ages
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ages
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groups decreased markedly
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except
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in
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age fifty plus
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incresed
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increased
. Before all of
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fell between 1970 and 1988, the figure of all
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rose until 1998. The line of age 14 to 24
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remained
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fairly stable
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next three years, after which the figure declined until the end of
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whe
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when
it reached 80%.
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