The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of four age groups of cinema visitors in a
specefic
country from 1978 to 2008.Correct your spelling
specific
Overall
, all of Add an article
the ages
ages
groups decreased markedly Change the noun form
age
expect
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except
in
age fifty plus Change preposition
for
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
incresed
. Before all of Correct your spelling
increased
lines
fell between 1970 and 1988, the figure of all Add an article
the lines
lines
rose until 1998. The line of age 14 to 24 Correct article usage
the lines
remaind
fairly stable Correct your spelling
remained
remain
the
next three years, after which the figure declined until the end of Change preposition
for the
period
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the period
whe
it reached 80%.Correct your spelling
when
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