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The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart indicates how different age groups
uses
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use
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internet in Australian homes in
some
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three different ways.It
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 shows the reasons for using it by them.
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,the use of it to send emails is in its pick , since it has the highest rate as compared to the other three uses.It is widely used by all the people in the same standard. On the other hand, social networking is mostly dominated by the young ones from age 15-24
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with
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 percentage of 80 as compared to adults 60 and over who rarely interact on it and
olnly
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only
 20%
people
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of people
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 can interact using it. In general, the majority
individuals
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of individuals
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 who
uses
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internet
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the internet
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 adversely are
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middle aged
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from ages 15 to 44,
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 45-54 consumes it, it does
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overturns
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 teenagers.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • usage patterns
  • highlighting variations
  • compare and contrast
  • primary reasons
  • identify differences
  • age brackets
  • usage purposes
  • popularity
  • online shopping
  • banking
  • Internet use
  • age groups
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