The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of film watchers in various age
groups
from 1978 to 2008. There are four different groups
including youngsters, aged between 14 and 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 49, and beyond 50 years old. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, in 1978, the 14-24 group
was the highest group
of cinema visitors with 90 per cent
, followed by those aged between 25 and 34 with 80 per cent
, which ranked second,
the 35-49 group
with 60 per cent
, and the oldest group
with only 40 per cent
, respectively.
However
, there was a downward trend
between 1978 and 1988. All age groups
dropped by around 20 per cent
but began to increase in 1998. From 1998 to 2003, each separate age group
of movie visitors has a constant trend
. In 2008, the eldest group
, aged more than 50 years old, was the only group
that had a positive trend
rising from 40 per cent
to 50 per cent
, which was equal to the 35-49 group
, while
other groups
had a negative trend
.
In conclusion, in 2008, the youngest group
still had the highest number of film audiences but the number decreased from 90 per cent
to 80 per cent
. Similarly
the 25 to 34 range and 35 to 49 range reduced in the same way. On the other hand
, the eldest range became more popular by having an upward trend
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, group, cent, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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