The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of film watchers in various age
groups
from 1978 to 2008. There are four different Use synonyms
groups
including youngsters, aged between 14 and 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 49, and beyond 50 years old. Units are measured in percentage.
Use synonyms
Overall
, in 1978, the 14-24 Linking Words
group
was the highest Use synonyms
group
of cinema visitors with 90 per Use synonyms
cent
, followed by those aged between 25 and 34 with 80 per Use synonyms
cent
, which ranked Use synonyms
second,
the 35-49 Linking Words
group
with 60 per Use synonyms
cent
, and the oldest Use synonyms
group
with only 40 per Use synonyms
cent
, respectively.
Use synonyms
However
, there was a downward Linking Words
trend
between 1978 and 1988. All age Use synonyms
groups
dropped by around 20 per Use synonyms
cent
but began to increase in 1998. From 1998 to 2003, each separate age Use synonyms
group
of movie visitors has a constant Use synonyms
trend
. In 2008, the eldest Use synonyms
group
, aged more than 50 years old, was the only Use synonyms
group
that had a positive Use synonyms
trend
rising from 40 per Use synonyms
cent
to 50 per Use synonyms
cent
, which was equal to the 35-49 Use synonyms
group
, Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
groups
had a negative Use synonyms
trend
.
In conclusion, in 2008, the youngest Use synonyms
group
still had the highest number of film audiences but the number decreased from 90 per Use synonyms
cent
to 80 per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
Similarly
the 25 to 34 range and 35 to 49 range reduced in the same way. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the eldest range became more popular by having an upward Linking Words
trend
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, group, cent, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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