Task 1 : The provided line graph depicts alterations in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The graph provides information regarding the changing patterns of the availability of modern technology among UK citizens during the years between 1996/97 and 2002/03.
It can be seen from the above diagram, that all the technological equipment had an upward trend throughout the given period.
Access to CD players had the highest percentage back in 1996
as well as
in the year 2000. Internet access had been available only from 1998/99 period but since then
, the availability among domestic
crowd for above mentioned, steadily increased Add an article
the domestic
with
an increasing rate. Change preposition
at
On the other hand
, home computer
, CD players and mobile phones Fix the agreement mistake
computers
were
accessible domestically since 1996. Mobile phone accessibility increased quite fast during the Wrong verb form
have been
early1998
/99 timeline and Correct your spelling
early 1998
then
became steady and levelled off after mid 1998/99, then
again picked up the popularity in 2000. Most people had CD players at home than
Rephrase
rather than
Add an article
the internet
internet
at any given time. Capitalize word
Internet
On the contrary
, mobile phones seem to have become popular
than home computers back in early 1998.
As an abstract, it is obvious that regardless of the category, modern technology has been popular among the domestic crowd in the UK.Correct quantifier usage
more popular
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