Task 1 : The provided line graph depicts alterations in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The graph provides information regarding the changing patterns of the availability of modern technology among UK citizens during the years between 1996/97 and 2002/03. It can be seen from the above diagram, that all the technological equipment had an upward trend throughout the given period. Access to CD players had the highest percentage back in 1996

as well as

in the year 2000. Internet access had been available only from 1998/99 period but since

then

, the availability among

domestic

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the domestic

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crowd for above mentioned, steadily increased

with

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at

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an increasing rate.

On the other hand

, home

computer

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computers

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, CD players and mobile phones

were

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have been

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accessible domestically since 1996. Mobile phone accessibility increased quite fast during the

early1998

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early 1998

/99 timeline and

then

became steady and levelled off after mid 1998/99,

then

again picked up the popularity in 2000. Most people had CD players at home

than

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rather than

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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at any given time.

On the contrary

, mobile phones seem to have become

popular

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more popular

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than home computers back in early 1998. As an abstract, it is obvious that regardless of the category, modern technology has been popular among the domestic crowd in the UK.