The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of food consumed in two time periods in Australia.
Overall
, quantity
of Bread, Fruit and vegetables has increased from 1950 to 2010 albeit in different Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
range
except for meat which decreased and seafood was almost constant. Vegetables and fruits are the most popular and seafood is the least.
Vegetables Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
was
the most year consumed food type in Change the verb form
were
year
1950 and despite Change the article
the year
of
some fluctuation in Change preposition
apply
1960s
and 1980s it was the most eaten in 2010 with 160 Change the article
the 1960s
kg
per person. Fruit
which was at 80 Add an article
The fruit
A fruit
Kg
for
Change preposition
on
an
average in 1950, Correct article usage
apply
also
dropped by 5 kg
in 1960s
and Change the article
the 1960s
then
it increased significantly with
140 Change preposition
to
kg
per citizen in 2010. Bread consumption in first
decade was 40 Change the article
the first
kg
after constant fluctuation for next
60 years it was at 60 Correct article usage
the next
kg
In 2010.
Meat starting
with the second most eaten item with 110 Wrong verb form
started
kg
per residents
but was almost constant before rising in 1990 and dropped significantly in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
resident
However
, seafood was the only food which remain
constant for the 60-year time period before showing very minute ups and downs.Wrong verb form
remained
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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