The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden , Italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featire and make comparisions where relevant

The graph below shows  average carbon dioxide(CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden , Italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featire and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates how altered the amount of carbon emitted per person in five countries namely the United Kingdom,Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that Italy and Portugal show an upward trend
whereas
the United Kingdom and Sweden show a downward trend throughout the given period. In the starting year massive amount of carbon emission registered in the United Kingdom, which is above 10 metric
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the least was Portugal.
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and reached around ten metric
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in 2007. In 1967, Sweden recorded just over 8 metric
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,
then
that figure increased sharply and peaked at 10 metric
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in 1997 before falling dramatically in 2007. In Italy, where carbon
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4 metric
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in 1967 ,
then
this
percentage took some fluctuations and rose steadily to reach 8 metric
tonnes
in the
last
year.
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