The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden , Italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featire and make comparisions where relevant
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The line graph illustrates how altered the amount of carbon emitted per person in five countries namely the United Kingdom,Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period between 1967 and 2007.
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the United Kingdom and Sweden show a downward trend throughout the given period.
In the starting year massive amount of carbon emission registered in the United Kingdom, which is above 10 metric Linking Words
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