The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden , Italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featire and make comparisions where relevant

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The line graph illustrates how altered the amount of carbon emitted per person in five countries namely the United Kingdom,Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period between 1967 and 2007.

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, it is clearly apparent that Italy and Portugal show an upward trend

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the United Kingdom and Sweden show a downward trend throughout the given period. In the starting year massive amount of carbon emission registered in the United Kingdom, which is above 10 metric

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the least was Portugal.

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the figure slightly

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and reached around ten metric

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in 2007. In 1967, Sweden recorded just over 8 metric

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that figure increased sharply and peaked at 10 metric

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in 1997 before falling dramatically in 2007. In Italy, where carbon

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4 metric

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in 1967 ,

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percentage took some fluctuations and rose steadily to reach 8 metric

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