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The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the CO2
emission
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 in different types of
vehicle
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vehicles
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, and it shows the number of
vehicles
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 in England and Wales from 2000 until 2020.
Overall
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, as the amount of
vehicles
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 has dramatically increased from 20 million in 2000 to 60 million in 2020, the amount of CO2 has increased
as a result
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.
Firstly
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, it has been noticeable that cars are most kind of
vehicles
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 that are involved in CO2
emission
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, as it was the highest one.
In addition
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, the CO2
emission
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 that comes from cars has risen more than before, as it was 2.25
tonnes
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 in 2000 and gradually increased to 3
tonnes
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 in 2020.
Secondly
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, buses have
also
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 shown an elevation in the amount of CO2
emission
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 as it jumped from nearly 0.6
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 1.25
tonnes
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 in 2020.
On the other hand
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, vans and trucks were the least type of
vehicles
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 that caused CO2
emission
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,and the CO2
emission
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 slightly increased from these
vehicles
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 in 2010 and
then
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 it
remains
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remained
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 stable.
To sum up
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, the CO2
emission
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 caused by
vehicles
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 has risen in England and Wales as the number of
vehicles
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 increased from 2000 to 2020.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emission, vehicles, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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