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The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the CO2
emission
 in different types of
vehicle
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
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, and it shows the number of
vehicles
 in England and Wales from 2000 until 2020.
Overall
, as the amount of
vehicles
 has dramatically increased from 20 million in 2000 to 60 million in 2020, the amount of CO2 has increased
as a result
.
Firstly
, it has been noticeable that cars are most kind of
vehicles
 that are involved in CO2
emission
, as it was the highest one.
In addition
, the CO2
emission
 that comes from cars has risen more than before, as it was 2.25
tonnes
 in 2000 and gradually increased to 3
tonnes
 in 2020.
Secondly
, buses have
also
 shown an elevation in the amount of CO2
emission
 as it jumped from nearly 0.6
tonnes
 in 2000 to 1.25
tonnes
 in 2020.
On the other hand
, vans and trucks were the least type of
vehicles
 that caused CO2
emission
,and the CO2
emission
 slightly increased from these
vehicles
 in 2010 and
then
 it
remains
Wrong verb form
remained
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 stable.
To sum up
, the CO2
emission
 caused by
vehicles
 has risen in England and Wales as the number of
vehicles
 increased from 2000 to 2020.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emission, vehicles, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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