A flow chart shows the process of processing wool into cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the various stages in the

process

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of producing

wool

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products using sheep

wool

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. It

is

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clearly illustrates, how sheep

wool

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is produced as

a

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cloths

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cloth

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.

This

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process

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undergoes nine stages.

while

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,

its

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starts with shearing the

wool

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, it ends with yarn.

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First

,

wool

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is sheared from the sheep which is suitable for the

process

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, after that

wools

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are cleaned several times and dried .

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dried

wools

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put

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were put

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into the machinery where

,

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spinning

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the spinning

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process

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took place. After that

wools

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are

separted

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separated

to

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into

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either string or

wool

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.

Srings

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Springs

are went

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are going

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to the recycling

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whereas

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wools

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are tufted.

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that

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they

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are stored in a safe place . Tufts are made of balls of yarn and

using

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used

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to mould

jackts

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jackets

jacks

and carpets,

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raw

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the raw

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yarn is used

to

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for

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knitting

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knit

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