The chart below the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the value of one country's exports in different categories in the years 2015 and 2016. The table indicates the average change in each category of exports in 2016 associated with 2015. It is clear from the forms that the figures were close to each other.
According to
what is depicted, the export of petroleum products was nearly 60 billion
. In 2016, the
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in that duration. The country exported almost 57 Replace the word
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, and the rate change was 8.5% .
In 2015, there were above than 40 billion
gems and jewellery were exported, and the rate of decreasing
was 5.18%. Agricultural products were almost Change the form of the verb
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equaled
. There was only Change the spelling
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. The country exported nearly 25 Change the form of the verb
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billion
of textiles in 2015. In addition
, it exported more than 30 billion
in the next year, so there was a big growing
in the figure.
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, it can be said that the proportion of export
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table
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table,
it is clear that
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were
expect
in gems and jewellery.Correct your spelling
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