You have completed the test! Below is the time you have spent on the activity. Time spent TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. After you finish, use the checklist to evaluate your writing task. Then, compare your task with the sample answer. The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the
number
of citizens living in India and
China
in billions from the time
period
of 2000 till the present and with a forecast for the year 2050.
Overall
, variation in both country's populations was seen albeit at different levels and India will cross
China
's
population
despite starting at a low
number
as compared to the year 2000. At the beginning of the
period
, There were 1250
billion
people living in
China
and
this
number
was steadily increasing with each passing decade by 2030 it touched a peak with 1450
billion
citizens.
However
, we have seen a constant decline in
population
after 2030 and it is estimated that in 2050 residents
number
will drop to 1400
billion
. India's
population
on the other hand
, at the outset of the
period
was less as compared to
China
with 1,000
billion
. But a significant rise was seen in
a
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number
of inhabitants surpassing
China
by the year 2030 and a continuous rise continued after that
also
with a prediction of the
population
to go around 1600
billion
by the end of the 50-year
period
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, china, period, population, billion with synonyms.
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