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You have completed the test! Below is the time you have spent on the activity. Time spent After you finish, use the checklist to evaluate your writing task. Then, compare your task with the sample answer. The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You have completed the test! Below is the time you have spent on the activity. Time spent After you finish, use the checklist to evaluate your writing task. Then, compare your task with the sample answer. The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts the
number
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 of citizens living in India and
China
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 in billions from the time
period
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 of 2000 till the present and with a forecast for the year 2050.
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, variation in both country's populations was seen albeit at different levels and India will cross
China
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's
population
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 despite starting at a low
number
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 as compared to the year 2000. At the beginning of the
period
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, There were 1250
billion
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 people living in
China
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 and
this
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number
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 was steadily increasing with each passing decade by 2030 it touched a peak with 1450
billion
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 citizens.
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, we have seen a constant decline in
population
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 after 2030 and it is estimated that in 2050 residents
number
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 will drop to 1400
billion
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. India's
population
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on the other hand
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, at the outset of the
period
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 was less as compared to
China
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 with 1,000
billion
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. But a significant rise was seen in
a
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number
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 of inhabitants surpassing
China
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 by the year 2030 and a continuous rise continued after that
also
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 with a prediction of the
population
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 to go around 1600
billion
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 by the end of the 50-year
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, china, period, population, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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