The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
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in six continents on Earth.
Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that
agriculture
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has more proportion of
use
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in four areas,
while
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domestic has the minimum percentage at
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fourth place. In North America, industrial
use
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is the main consumption with around half and
agriculture
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is the less significant figure at nearly 40%,
whereas
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domestic
use
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is the lowest at 13%.
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, South American
use
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in
agriculture
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has a high proportion at just above 70% and other uses have about 20% and one-tenth, in domestic and industrial, respectively. But for Europe, industrial
use
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is just over 50%,
agriculture
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has 32%, and domestic
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15%. For Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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, the
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of
agriculture
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use
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is approximately the same at 81-88%. The
domestic
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consumption is
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the same in Central and South East
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Asia
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at 7% and for Africa,
this
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aspect is higher at 2%. Industrial
use
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is different for these three areas.
Firstly
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, South East
Asia
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at 12%,
secondly
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, Africa with 7%, and
finally
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, Central
Asia
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with exactly 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, agriculture, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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