The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
in six continents on Earth.
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Overall
, it is clear from the charts that Linking Words
agriculture
has more proportion of Use synonyms
use
in four areas, Use synonyms
while
domestic has the minimum percentage at Linking Words
also
fourth place.
In North America, industrial Linking Words
use
is the main consumption with around half and Use synonyms
agriculture
is the less significant figure at nearly 40%, Use synonyms
whereas
domestic Linking Words
use
is the lowest at 13%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, South American Linking Words
use
in Use synonyms
agriculture
has a high proportion at just above 70% and other uses have about 20% and one-tenth, in domestic and industrial, respectively. But for Europe, industrial Use synonyms
use
is just over 50%, Use synonyms
agriculture
has 32%, and domestic Use synonyms
have
15%.
For Africa, Central Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Asia
, and South East Use synonyms
Asia
, the Use synonyms
percent
of Replace the word
percentage
agriculture
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use
is approximately the same at 81-88%. The Use synonyms
domestic
consumption is Capitalize word
Domestic
also
the same in Central and South East Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
Asia
at 7% and for Africa, Use synonyms
this
aspect is higher at 2%. Industrial Linking Words
use
is different for these three areas. Use synonyms
Firstly
, South East Linking Words
Asia
at 12%, Use synonyms
secondly
, Africa with 7%, and Linking Words
finally
, Central Linking Words
Asia
with exactly 5%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, agriculture, asia with synonyms.
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