The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
in six continents on Earth.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that
agriculture
has more proportion of
use
in four areas,
while
domestic has the minimum percentage at
also
fourth place. In North America, industrial
use
is the main consumption with around half and
agriculture
is the less significant figure at nearly 40%,
whereas
domestic
use
is the lowest at 13%.
Moreover
, South American
use
in
agriculture
has a high proportion at just above 70% and other uses have about 20% and one-tenth, in domestic and industrial, respectively. But for Europe, industrial
use
is just over 50%,
agriculture
has 32%, and domestic
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15%. For Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
, the
percent
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of
agriculture
use
is approximately the same at 81-88%. The
domestic
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consumption is
also
the same in Central and South East
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Asia
at 7% and for Africa,
this
aspect is higher at 2%. Industrial
use
is different for these three areas.
Firstly
, South East
Asia
at 12%,
secondly
, Africa with 7%, and
finally
, Central
Asia
with exactly 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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