The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
in six continents on Earth.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that agriculture
has more proportion of use
in four areas, while
domestic has the minimum percentage at also
fourth place.
In North America, industrial use
is the main consumption with around half and agriculture
is the less significant figure at nearly 40%, whereas
domestic use
is the lowest at 13%. Moreover
, South American use
in agriculture
has a high proportion at just above 70% and other uses have about 20% and one-tenth, in domestic and industrial, respectively. But for Europe, industrial use
is just over 50%, agriculture
has 32%, and domestic have
15%.
For Africa, Central Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Asia
, and South East Asia
, the percent
of Replace the word
percentage
agriculture
use
is approximately the same at 81-88%. The domestic
consumption is Capitalize word
Domestic
also
the same in Central and South East of
Change preposition
apply
Asia
at 7% and for Africa, this
aspect is higher at 2%. Industrial use
is different for these three areas. Firstly
, South East Asia
at 12%, secondly
, Africa with 7%, and finally
, Central Asia
with exactly 5%.Submitted by Kawasaki on
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