The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the medical costs with the
ratio
of GDP, in 12 Eruropean
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European
country
for the years 2002,20007 and 2012.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, Switzerland
health consumption is the highest rate. Change noun form
Switzerland's
On the other
hand
Estonia has the lowest amount of Add a comma
hand,
ratio
.
Belgium, Estonia, Spain and Switzerland's ratio
is always stay steady in
every 5 years. Switzerland has the highest Change preposition
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ratio
, just above 10 percentage
and Replace the word
per cent
Estania
has the lowest percentage rate with nearly 2.
In 2002 and 2007, Denmark, Correct your spelling
Estonia
Lithunia
, Norway, Poland and Slovenia expenditure rates stayed Correct your spelling
Lithuania
same
, Correct article usage
the same
however
in all that
Correct pronoun usage
those
counties
costs of health increased. Correct your spelling
countries
While
others are
increased in 2012 Luxembourg decreased.France has no pattern, it is Unnecessary verb
apply
fluactuated
. Correct your spelling
fluctuated
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In
n
Netherlands Correct your spelling
the
in
every Change preposition
apply
fives
years rates of cost Fix the agreement mistake
five
raised
.Wrong verb form
have risen
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