The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of British
students
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at one university in England who could speak languages other than English, in the years 2000 and 2010.
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, it is clear from the charts that Spanish
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was the most spoken
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in both years,
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the percentage for other languages increased, decreased, or stayed the same. In
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year 2000,
Spanish
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the Spanish
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language
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was spoken by approximately one-third of the
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, and
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rose to 35% in 2010. The percentage of
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who were not able to speak another
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was 20% in 2000 and 10% in 2010.
French
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The French
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language
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accounted for one in ten
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in both years, and
German
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the German
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language
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also
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had the same segment in 2010.
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, the
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who spoke another
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and those who spoke two other languages made up 25% in 2000.
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, the
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percentage
of these two categories slightly grew up and reached
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35% in 2010.
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