The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the most popular three names which were given to males and females in the UK between the years 1925 and 2000.

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, the most common three names used for boys (Daniel, Oliver, and Alexander) and girls (Sophia, Isabella, and Emily) were chosen by over 8

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parents in 2000. Except for Daniel, all of the five names were becoming more popular after 1975. In 1925, Daniel was the most common

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boys, and it started to decline in 1975 after increasing its popularity in 50 years. The other

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for boys, Alexander, rose dramatically after 1975 and reached ten

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babies, whilst Oliver fluctuated. There was a massive resurgence for the

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Oliver to around 11

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in 2000 after receding to almost none in 1975.

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, Emily was always the most famous

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for girls between the years 1925 and 2000. Despite a slight

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in 1950, it accelerated and reached

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around 11

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parents. Isabella and Sophia were not used before 1975.

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, in 2000, Isabella and Sophia were given

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around 11

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and 9

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to females respectively.

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The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, while others think we can use as much water as we want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

museums and ar galleries shuld concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries. Agree or disagree

Nowadays getting a job is becoming harder in poor countries leading to a rise in unemployment. Some people believe that pupils should only be allowed to access primary education while others believe that secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?