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The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
#salaries #men #women #occupations #information #features #comparison
The
given
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table
informs
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below informs
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 the typical weekly wages of
men
 and
women
 in varied job occupations in 2015.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that
men
 are paid more than
women
from
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in
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 all types of
jobs
,
while
professionals
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professional
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workers
are
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have
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 having highest average salary
in
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for
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 both
gender
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genders
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. In terms of
male
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males
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, professionals led as the most paid job for $2000 every week in 2015,
while
 manual labourers
had
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became the least one, who only collected
for
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about $1100.
On the other hand
, both administrative/clerical
workers
 and service
workers
 were paid slightly
similar
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 at $1350 and $1300, respectively, only 50 dollars difference. Meanwhile, the second-most paid
jobs
 for
men
 was technicians who earned $1400. Regarding female
jobs
, same as
men
,
women
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and women
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 professionals gained $1900 weekly and they became the highest allowance from the other employments.
While
 in the second
positions
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position
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, there were
Administrator
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administrators
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 who earned $1000, relatively smaller than the
men
 had earned.
Moreover
, Technicians and service
workers
 had similar income
by
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of
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 $50,
while
surpirisingly
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surprisingly
, technicians earned less only
for
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apply
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$900. From other
jobs
,
women
 manual
laborers
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labourers
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 least paid
for
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apply
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only $850,
and
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which
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 made it
as
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the
unworth
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unworthy
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jobs
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job
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in
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for
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 both genders.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, jobs, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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