The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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given
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informs
the typical weekly wages of Rephrase
below informs
men
and Use synonyms
women
in varied job occupations in 2015.
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that Linking Words
men
are paid more than Use synonyms
women
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from
all types of Change preposition
in
jobs
, Use synonyms
while
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professionals
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professional
workers
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are
having highest average salary Verb problem
have
in
both Change preposition
for
gender
.
In terms of Change to a plural noun
genders
male
, professionals led as the most paid job for $2000 every week in 2015, Fix the agreement mistake
males
while
manual labourers Linking Words
had
became the least one, who only collected Unnecessary verb
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for
about $1100. Change preposition
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On the other hand
, both administrative/clerical Linking Words
workers
and service Use synonyms
workers
were paid slightly Use synonyms
similar
at $1350 and $1300, respectively, only 50 dollars difference. Meanwhile, the second-most paid Change the word
similarly
jobs
for Use synonyms
men
was technicians who earned $1400.
Regarding female Use synonyms
jobs
, same as Use synonyms
men
, Use synonyms
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women
professionals gained $1900 weekly and they became the highest allowance from the other employments. Correct word choice
and women
While
in the second Linking Words
positions
, there were Fix the agreement mistake
position
Administrator
who earned $1000, relatively smaller than the Fix the agreement mistake
administrators
men
had earned. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Technicians and service Linking Words
workers
had similar income Use synonyms
by
$50, Change preposition
of
while
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surpirisingly
, technicians earned less only Correct your spelling
surprisingly
for
$900. From other Change preposition
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jobs
, Use synonyms
women
manual Use synonyms
laborers
least paid Change the spelling
labourers
for
only $850, Change preposition
apply
and
made it Correct word choice
which
as
the Change preposition
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unworth
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unworthy
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jobs
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job
in
both genders.Change preposition
for
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