The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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men
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jobs
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On the other hand
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and service workers
were paid slightly similar
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for men
was technicians who earned $1400.
Regarding female jobs
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, women
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