To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000.  Describe the information in the graph. Write at least 150 words.

To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000. 

Describe the information in the graph. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about the farm's number and farm employees in
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States between
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1910 and
2000.
overall
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, The number of farms and all workers showed a steady but a decreased trend over the period.
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, The horizontal axis shows the numbers of both the workers and the farms .
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, the vertical axis illustrates the years, from 1910 to 2000. In 1910 , The worker's numbers made up 13% . The red line climbed slightly by around 13% % and 11% respectively.
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, it continued to drop significantly to almost 10% In 1945. During 1945 and 1950, the figure remained Steady at approximately 10% and declined dramatically to about 3 per cent in 1970. It hit a
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of about 3% in 2000.
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, In 1910, The Farm's numbers were about 6% . The green line remained steady until 1935.
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, It went down slightly around 3% in 1960 and continued to fall plunging by about 2% in 2000
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • steadily declined
  • sharp decrease
  • fluctuated
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • consistent downward trend
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • notable increase
  • plunge
  • coincide
  • drastically
  • proportionally
  • trends
  • timeline
  • significant change
  • marked difference
  • fell dramatically
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