The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the history and projections
the
United States of Change preposition
of the
America of
fuel consumption from 1980-Change preposition
America's
2030
. It consists of petroleum, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower.
In 1980, three fuels, namely petroleum, coal and natural gas Change preposition
to 2030
standed
at 35, 17 and 20 Correct your spelling
stood
quadrillion
units respectively. They had modest fluctuation over a period of 30 years. However
, in 2030, these three reached a high
number than others in 50, 30, and 25 units respectively. Correct word choice
higher
Furthermore
, nuclears began spending around 4 quadrillion
of energy consumption,
and peaked at almost 10 Remove the comma
apply
quadrillion
in 2030. Nevertheless
, solar or wind and water-power
oscillate slightly around 5 Correct your spelling
water power
quadrillion
components.
Overall
, Petrol and oil is
the highest position and hydropower is the lowest Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
energy consumption. From 1980 to 2005, there was a slight fluctuation in petrol and oil, Change preposition
apply
while
in
prediction rose dramatically until 2030. Change preposition
apply
However
, hydropower remained constantly
in history and projection.Change the word
constant
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