The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the ownership of computers on
basis
of population Correct article usage
the basis
as well as
basis
of education from 2002 to 2010 time period. Add an article
the basis
Overall
, percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
computer
holder
have grown constantly with time and people with higher Fix the agreement mistake
holders
level
of education have the highest rate of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
computer
ownership.
More than half of the population were having
computers in 2002. Wrong verb form
had
This
number
rose gradually with each year, and by, 2010 proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
computer
holder
was 75%, giving Fix the agreement mistake
holders
the
rise of 20% in 8 year period.
When we compare it Correct article usage
a
on
level of education, Change preposition
to
number
of no high school diploma Change the article
a number
the number
student
having Fix the agreement mistake
students
laptop
in 2002 Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
were
15%, and by, 2010 Change the verb form
was
this
number
reached to
more than 40%, which is even more than high school graduate Change preposition
apply
computer
owners in 2002, and it is slightly less than 40%. However
, by 2010 the percentage reaches to
65%. 1 out of 2 Change preposition
apply
student
in college were having Change to a plural noun
students
computer
in 2002 and now this
number
has exceeded 35% in 2010. Student
with graduation and postgraduation Fix the agreement mistake
Students
have
70% and 75% of Wrong verb form
had
computer
holder
in 2002 and in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
holders
this
percentage was and
90% for graduates and just slightly less than 100% for postgraduates.Correct word choice
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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