The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The pie charts compare the
proportion
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of
three
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types of
nutrients
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(sodium, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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) in typical meals
include
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including
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breakfast,
lunch
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,
dinner
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, and snacks. These
nutrients
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can be unhealthy if consumed
in
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at
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high
level
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levels
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.
Overall
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, the highest
proportion
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of
three
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nutrients
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, except added
sugar
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, are mostly consumed during
dinner
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and
lunch
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.
Moreover
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, added
sugar
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is highly found in snacks.
Dinner
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and
lunch
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are the typical meals which have the highest level of
three
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nutrients
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. In terms of
dinner
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, the
proportion
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of sodium, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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are accounting
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accounts
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for 43%, 37%, and 23% respectively.
While
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in
lunch
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, the
proportion
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is around 10% lower than
dinner
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, at just below 30%, 26%, and just below one-fifth, respectively. In terms of the other typical meals, breakfast has the lowest
proportion
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of
three
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nutrients
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which constitute around 15% each.
On the other hand
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,
while
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added
sugar
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has almost half of
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proportion
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the proportion
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in snacks at 42%, sodium and saturated fat
make up
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makeup
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35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, three, nutrients, sugar, lunch, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • average percentage
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • meal times
  • excessive
  • implications
  • dietary
  • intake
  • macronutrients
  • saturated fats
  • sugars
  • sodium
  • unhealthy
  • proportion
  • variation
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