Some university students to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is believed that

qualification

is more crucial than

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other

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college

students

their

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primary

subjects

. There are arguments on both sides of

this

very topical debate, and I will discuss them now. On the one hand, the global era needs the multidisciplinary knowledge that

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to learn

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other

subjects

to broaden the expertise.

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Furthermore

,

this

knowledge has several assignments that

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undergrad

students

hectic to gain an understanding.

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,

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economics

students

need to grasp

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data science to complete their thesis.

However

, they have ongoing major

subjects

,

while

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they

must learn other

subjects

that

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to their thesis.

Hence

, it takes a lot of time to fulfill the

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of requirements

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their main

subjects

and

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subjects

. On the other

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, time management is needed to take

qualification

for employment. It means that

students

might have

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that provide their time to get

qualification

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.

Moreover

, they can easily

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offer

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from some companies. It would be

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benefit

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for their future, they can demonstrate their

compentence

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competence

that

useful

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for working.

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, essential skills are needed for new employers which

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capability

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their job desk.

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this

qualification

, fresh graduates can create good movements after their

study

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in

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university.

Therefore

,

qualification

is fruitful for freshmen to improve their skills. In conclusion, my own feeling is that

qualification

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qualifications

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produce

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high quality

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of

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students

to

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their future jobs. Of course, they can make fast-track

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by upgrading their competencies.

In addition

, it will widen

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many opportunities in

this

area.