You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. •describe the problem with the equipment •explain how this problem is affecting your work •say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear madam or sir
My name is Sam. I would like to discuss the problem I am having with
laptop
which I bought from your shop.
I am doing Add an article
a laptop
the laptop
full-time
job Add an article
the full-time
a full-time
as
technical software which is Change preposition
in
online
job. Daily I Add an article
an online
am using
Wrong verb form
use
laptop
for 8 to 10 hours. Add an article
the laptop
a laptop
Last
month I bought new
Correct article usage
a new
hp
laptop i5 with 3 Correct your spelling
HP
year's
warranty,recommended by my friend. For Change noun form
year
first
few weeks it was working properly,Correct article usage
the first
I
was very happy .
Correct word choice
and I
However
from Add a comma
However,
last
week
it's giving me hardAdd a comma
week,
me
. So the problem Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
for Add a missing verb
is that
first
2 hours Correct article usage
the first
its
going good but after some time it Correct your spelling
it's
ask
for Change the verb form
asks
restart
. After Add an article
a restart
doing
restarting it takes hours to start. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
is giving me problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
while
am doing my work.
If
would be Correct your spelling
It
great
appreciation if Change the word
greatly
i
Change the capitalization
I
will
get Verb problem
could
response
soon!
Yours sincerely
SamAdd an article
a response
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grammar
Make sure to proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and typos. For example, "I am having with laptop" should be "I am having with a laptop," and "giving me hard me" should be "giving me a hard time."
task
Include more specific details about your expectations for resolution. For example, you might want to ask for a repair, replacement, or refund, which will make your request clearer to the recipient.
task
You have clearly described the problem with the equipment, how it is affecting your work, and what you hope the shop will do to resolve it.
logic
The letter has a logical flow from introduction to problem description, impact on work, and requested action.
tone
You addressed the reader politely by using "Dear madam or sir" and ended the letter with "Yours sincerely," which is appropriate for formal correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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