You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● explain why you want to take time off work ● give details of the amount of time you need (2 weeks) ● suggest how your work could be covered while you are away. (2 other software dev are in context, i am available for emails or calls if needed) Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/,

#company #time #work #manager #amount #weeks #software #dev #context #emails #sir

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Jagatheesan Manoharan, Chief Operational Manager of Rogers Communication Department and I am writing

this

letter to inquire

the

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possibility of applying for a vacation starting from October 1 2024 to November 1 2024. I have been working

continously

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continuously

without taking any off for the past two years and I am feeling burnt out.

This

year

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as my kids have grown up I am looking forward to

travel

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carribean

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Caribbean

islands

along with

my family. I am considering one month of

vaccation

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vaccination

so I could enjoy my stay as much as possible. I have completed 50% of the new accounting software project.

However

, there are several bugs to fix and

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artificial intelligence for analytics

have

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not been added yet. I have appointed two senior developers and one junior developer in my team to take over the rest of the project until I return. In

addtion

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addition

, I have provided them

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email to communicate if any

neccesary

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necessary

help

needed

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but have already instructed them that my replies won't be on time

eventhough

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even though

I expect to reply as soon as possible. I hope you will consider my request positively and approve my

vaccation

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vaccination

and pay so I would be able to refresh

my self

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. Thanks, Damn

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that your letter is more concise and clearly organized. For example, separate the reasons for taking leave and the plan for project coverage into clearly distinct sections.

task achievement

Avoid minor grammatical errors and ensure accurate spelling and punctuation throughout the letter.

task achievement

The letter includes all necessary information and addresses all parts of the prompt: the reason for leave, the duration, and the plan for coverage.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is appropriate and professional, making the request clear and polite.

coherence cohesion

The letter opens and closes in a conventional and courteous manner.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

209 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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