The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart illustrates the portion of British inhabitants' donations to charity services by means of 5
age
ranges in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the highest donation was presented by the middle ages which 36-50 group
in 1990 while
the 51-65 team in 2010. Moreover
, it is a
glance that, there are Correct article usage
apply
fluctuated
patterns shown in both periods. In both years, younger people did not tend to donate to charity services since that Wrong verb form
fluctuating
age
group
presented the lowest ratio. in addition
to that, in 2010, both the middle-aged age
team and the eldest persons donated the same portion to charity activities.
Even though, older
Correct article usage
the older
group
's contribution decreased in 1990s
, in the same Change the article
the 1990s
group
preference has been changed in 2010 due to
the fact that,
it remarked the peak from the 51-60 Remove the comma
apply
age
group
. While
comparing the data, it can be highlighted the gradual increase from the 18 to 50 years group
and after that contribution has been declined. By contrast
, in 2010, it is depicted that the enhancing period has grown up to 65 years.Submitted by dilkiapsara on
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