The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart displays the recorded replies from the UK students when asked about their situation with respect to handling their finances.
Overall
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majority
of the students considered themselves organised. Correct article usage
the majority
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Although
, there were more students that claimed their position to be averagely organised than any other category.
More than half of the candidates described their handling capabilities to be fair. The next highest proportion was of those Correct word choice
However
that
viewed themselves to be heavily organised accounting for nearly a fifth of the total share.
Contrarily, Correct pronoun usage
who
this
was closely followed by the ones who rated themselves to be not very organised with exactly 20% proportion. The minimum percentage was of those who were not organised at all making to 4% of the total value.Linking Words
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