The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women.
The line chart illustrates the
birth
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rate
data between Use synonyms
women
in England from the year 1973 to 2020.
Three out of the six age groups (under 20, 20-25, and 40 and more) had experienced a decline in the Use synonyms
rate
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. For the under 20-year-old female, it went from 60 births/1000 Use synonyms
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in 1973 to about 40 births/1000 in 2008. Use synonyms
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the age group of 20-25 reached a Linking Words
rate
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of nearly 93 Use synonyms
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/1000 which was previously about 125 in the year of 1973. Use synonyms
Lastly
, for the Linking Words
women
who are 40 and above, the Use synonyms
birth
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rate
was steadily decreasing over the years till it landed up at almost 10 births/1000 Use synonyms
women
in 2008.
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However
, some groups had an incline with time. Ladies between the ages of 30 to 35 had a steady increase Linking Words
whereas
the other group of Linking Words
women
aged between 35 and 39 had a dramatic climb from 1988 till 1998 and after that, it faced a plateau. Use synonyms
Finally
, the ages of 25 to 29 had an obvious fluctuation over the period of time.Linking Words
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