The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making progress, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the machinery and steps involved in the
production
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cement
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process
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production
for construction.
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cement
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production
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process
begins with crushing two key raw Use synonyms
materials
, limestone and clay, into a fine powder using a crusher. Use synonyms
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then
thoroughly mixed in a mixer. Linking Words
Afterward
, it passes through a rotating heater, where it is exposed to heat, and is Change the spelling
Afterwards
further
ground by a grinder to produce the final Linking Words
cement
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cement
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then
packaged in bags for storage and distribution.
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cement
is combined with three additional Use synonyms
materials
: gravel (50%), sand (25%), and a smaller portion of water (10%). These Use synonyms
materials
are mixed together in a concrete mixer to form concrete, which is used in construction.
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while
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cement
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process
involves several specialized machines and steps, the concrete Use synonyms
production
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process
is relatively simple, requiring only the combination of Use synonyms
materials
in a concrete mixer. Use synonyms
Cement
serves as the key ingredient in concrete Use synonyms
production
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along with
gravel, sand, and water.Linking Words
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