The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of people and the birth percentage and the
death
percentage in England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
the trend in the population size of both countries showed a significant increase during the given period. While
the birth and death
ratio fluctuated over the 400 years.
Looking in more detail at the number of residents, in 1700 it began at under 5 million
, then
experienced a considerable rise with 10 million
in 1750 before returned
to under 5 Change the form of the verb
returning
million
in 1800. There was rapid growth to a peak of 50,000,000 in 2000. In contrast
, the rate of birth was slightly higher than the death
rate, fluctuated
from 30 Wrong verb form
fluctuating
million
in 1700 to reaching approximately 34% in 2000. While
the death
rate started at 25 million
in 1700, over the 19th and 20th showed a decline, accounting for 20 million
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