The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the number of people and the birth percentage and the

death

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percentage in England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the trend in the population size of both countries showed a significant increase during the given period.

While

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the birth and

death

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ratio fluctuated over the 400 years. Looking in more detail at the number of residents, in 1700 it began at under 5

million

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then

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experienced a considerable rise with 10

million

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in 1750 before

returned

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to under 5

million

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in 1800. There was rapid growth to a peak of 50,000,000 in 2000.

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, the rate of birth was slightly higher than the

death

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rate,

fluctuated

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fluctuating

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from 30

million

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in 1700 to reaching approximately 34% in 2000.

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the

death

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rate started at 25

million

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in 1700, over the 19th and 20th showed a decline, accounting for 20

million

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Vocabulary: Replace the words death, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fluctuations
stabilize
steep
advancements
notable
shift
norms
impact
critical factor
relatively stable
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