On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: * Describe the item you lost * Explain how you lost it. * Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the lost item which will be covered by your company due to
travel insurance.
I have lost one of the most valuable items, namely, Dell
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a Dell
laptop
. I had to invest the
significant funds to buy Correct article usage
apply
this
latest laptop
with its excellent features.
Let me elaborate the
incident in more Change preposition
on the
details
. Yesterday I was enjoying a picturesque view of Fix the agreement mistake
detail
lake
and I was carrying my Add an article
the lake
laptop
with me because I wanted to capture those mind blowing
moments in it. One family requested me to click their photos and I put my Add a hyphen
mind-blowing
laptop
near to me. After clicking their pictures, I realised my laptop
bag was missing, making me panic and mentally disturbed.
As a valuable customer, I would like to request you to cover the expenses of my
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this
item due to
having travel insurance. when I signed my agreement with you, it was clearly stated to cover anything lost.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours Sincerely,
pawanm
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Pawan
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coherence cohesion
Try to be more concise and direct in your descriptions to maintain coherence.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure all paragraphs are evenly developed to enhance flow.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing.
task achievement
The writing tone is polite and suitable for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite