The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the developmental
changes
that took place in the village
of Kelsbey from year
1780 to Change the article
the year
year
2000. The image given shows the Change the article
the year
changes
in the village
made over three time period
; 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
periods
Overall
, a drastic change has taken place in the village
of Kelsbey if years
1780 and 2000 are compared. There has been Correct article usage
the years
addition
of roads, expansion of homes and, development of Add an article
the addition
an addition
school
, shops and sports fields. But at the same time, there is Fix the agreement mistake
schools
elimination
of the Add an article
the elimination
farms
and woods
over the two centuries.
To begin
with, in year
1780, there was a Change the article
the year
river
flowing from north-west
to south west Correct article usage
the north-west
side
of the village
. Whereas
,
on the north-east Remove the comma
apply
side
there were only 100 Add a comma
side,
home
, Fix the agreement mistake
homes
rest
of the east Correct article usage
the rest
side
from north to south was covered by woods
. In the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
village
, were farms
.
On the other hand
, after almost a century, only few
Change the article
a few
changes
were noticed. A bridge was constructed over the river
, a road was built from the river
extending from Correct article usage
the north-east
north-east
to Correct your spelling
northeast
north west
Add a hyphen
north-west
side
towards the residential area, and there was an addition of 100 homes. There seems to be a reduction in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
farms
and woods
also
.
In contrast
to 1780 and 1860, major changes
are observed in year
2000. The total number of houses increased to 500 in Change the article
the year
north-eastern
Correct article usage
the north-eastern
side
only, whereas
new construction of schools and sports field in south-east
of the Add an article
the south-east
village
. A new road was built, connecting the homes to the school area. Shops are seen alongside the river
, in south-west
part of the Add an article
the south-west
village
, and just adjacent to the shops is a wetland for birds. In year
2000, it is seen that there are no more Change the article
the year
farms
and woods
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